Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Chapter 2 SHARK ATTACK...

My eyes were closed very tight, I felt water dripping on my skin.

I slowly opened my eyes. I was under the water! I had no idea how I was breathing? I Looked down- I had gills, ahh.

Then I slowly swam around ahh ehh ohh shark s.



There were one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine. There were nine sharks right in front of me!

I quickly swam away. But it is was late ...

They had spotted me all ready. As fast as a blink of a eye they were after me. I quickly hid behind a rock, they swam away, phew! Even though they were gone I could stiil smell shark. I looked behind, Oh No there were more, ahh is this the end of my adventure??????????????
By Laura Walker aka Charlie Small

Chapter 1 Another Danger

As I quickly opened my eyes from a raucous noise as loud as a gunshot I wondered where was I?
I was in a weird looking mushroom house with a hole in the roof. It had big red spots like an apple. The smell was as stinky as smelly cheese that had been sitting in a rubbish bin for ages. I pushed down the door to see a colossal, red eyed dinosaur whose roaring was as piercing as a tree falling down. I couldn’t believe my eyes, AHH!
Then I looked around to see other strange creatures and I saw a pretty fairy on a horse. Suddenly the dinosaur saw me and started charging at me, AHH HELP...........

By Neve Buchan aka Charlie Small