You won’t believe it! I was walking down a rocky steep road that lead to a deep dark tunnel that looked like the ash of the Puppet Master. When I entered the tunnel I tripped over a rock ‘YOUCH’ I cried as my voice echoed through the tunnel and came to a pulse . As I hauled myself up I saw two gleaming lights, like blood red eyes staring back at me in the thick shadow. I saw the most peculiar creepy creature that I’ve seen in my journal. Dripping with blood and with dead bodies around it on the ground, covered with flies. It only had hind legs , purple glimmering scales like plums , a big lion tail , a sixteen foot tall spiky neck and one big head, so I thought ...
I stepped back as the clumsy monster stood up to strike. I reached for my rucksack and took my chisel and chopped its head off as it struck, seven more heads grew back !!! How am I going to get of this one now?
Monday, September 19, 2011
The Mistake
I’ve been awoken by a yum smell; it smelt as nice as pie. I hear things clanging and crashing! I look out the window to see a restaurant.
I walked a little closer and saw that it was called the Big Tree. I walked inside and looked through my rucksack for some money. YES 40 bucks. I walked to the cashier and brought food. Just then I saw a sigh saying Train station. Ok I’ll use my ticket from my rucksack.
When I wasn’t looking a piece of paper fell off the sign, it said the Betty MAE.
When I went out I said wow this doesn’t look like the train station. I was so busy looking around I didn’t notice I was stepping aboard Captain Cut Throats ship. Then I heard her voice, “Good to have you back!” She said. “Now get to work!!!”
By Aidan Garrity a.k.a Charlie Small
I walked a little closer and saw that it was called the Big Tree. I walked inside and looked through my rucksack for some money. YES 40 bucks. I walked to the cashier and brought food. Just then I saw a sigh saying Train station. Ok I’ll use my ticket from my rucksack.
When I wasn’t looking a piece of paper fell off the sign, it said the Betty MAE.
When I went out I said wow this doesn’t look like the train station. I was so busy looking around I didn’t notice I was stepping aboard Captain Cut Throats ship. Then I heard her voice, “Good to have you back!” She said. “Now get to work!!!”
By Aidan Garrity a.k.a Charlie Small
THE BIG CHASE
Ahh! I just woke up from my concussion! I forgot how I got it, I was in the water and I was getting chased by a colossal fish! I was swimming and swimming then it was about time I got to shore.
Then there was a giant, it was as big as the Sky tower! I found a huge piece of chicken. I threw it into the water and the giant jumped into the water to get the chicken.
Next I run into the Jungle and Thrack, a big silverback gorilla from my first journal Gorilla City, started chasing me! I was running and running for my life! And suddenly I remembered I could speak gorilla, I turned around and saw it was actually Grapple from Gorilla city.
By Cory g A.K.A Charlie Small
Then there was a giant, it was as big as the Sky tower! I found a huge piece of chicken. I threw it into the water and the giant jumped into the water to get the chicken.
Next I run into the Jungle and Thrack, a big silverback gorilla from my first journal Gorilla City, started chasing me! I was running and running for my life! And suddenly I remembered I could speak gorilla, I turned around and saw it was actually Grapple from Gorilla city.
By Cory g A.K.A Charlie Small
The Nice Place
Oh my gosh I just got woken by a bunch of birds, well I’ve been asleep for ages, but where am I? I’m in some nice gazebo, with a bunch of eagles around me, and lots of nice trees with flowers they are roses! The colours are...red, pink and white they smelt really nice!
Maybe I’ll phone my mum? So I phoned my mum, Hello I said “Oh Charlie are you having a great time, you’ve got to hurry up your dinner is getting cold. Oh here comes your dad.”
“Mum, mum,” Oh no she’s hung up again, well at least I get to hear from her, but her voice sounds like a bodyguard! So what am I supposed to do now? Maybe I should look around, this is odd it’s such a nice place, and how the heck did I get here?
“Hello Charlie I’ve been waiting for you!”
“Who are you?” I asked.
“I’m Jake man!” said the man.
“WOW, your Jakeman, I’ve wanted to ask you so many questions!”
“Yes, Yes boy ok boy you’ve got to calm down! Now I’m here to take you home.”
“HOME ,YAY, so where can I start with my questions?” “Come on boy you’re like a chit chatting lad.” he laughed.
“Well you’re as awesome as Wild Bob Ffance.” I laughed back.
“Come on kid we’ve got to go”........
By Faye
Maybe I’ll phone my mum? So I phoned my mum, Hello I said “Oh Charlie are you having a great time, you’ve got to hurry up your dinner is getting cold. Oh here comes your dad.”
“Mum, mum,” Oh no she’s hung up again, well at least I get to hear from her, but her voice sounds like a bodyguard! So what am I supposed to do now? Maybe I should look around, this is odd it’s such a nice place, and how the heck did I get here?
“Hello Charlie I’ve been waiting for you!”
“Who are you?” I asked.
“I’m Jake man!” said the man.
“WOW, your Jakeman, I’ve wanted to ask you so many questions!”
“Yes, Yes boy ok boy you’ve got to calm down! Now I’m here to take you home.”
“HOME ,YAY, so where can I start with my questions?” “Come on boy you’re like a chit chatting lad.” he laughed.
“Well you’re as awesome as Wild Bob Ffance.” I laughed back.
“Come on kid we’ve got to go”........
By Faye
Tuesday, August 30, 2011
Chapter 2 SHARK ATTACK...
My eyes were closed very tight, I felt water dripping on my skin.
I slowly opened my eyes. I was under the water! I had no idea how I was breathing? I Looked down- I had gills, ahh.
Then I slowly swam around ahh ehh ohh shark s.
There were one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine. There were nine sharks right in front of me!
I quickly swam away. But it is was late ...
They had spotted me all ready. As fast as a blink of a eye they were after me. I quickly hid behind a rock, they swam away, phew! Even though they were gone I could stiil smell shark. I looked behind, Oh No there were more, ahh is this the end of my adventure??????????????
By Laura Walker aka Charlie Small
I slowly opened my eyes. I was under the water! I had no idea how I was breathing? I Looked down- I had gills, ahh.
Then I slowly swam around ahh ehh ohh shark s.
There were one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine. There were nine sharks right in front of me!
I quickly swam away. But it is was late ...
They had spotted me all ready. As fast as a blink of a eye they were after me. I quickly hid behind a rock, they swam away, phew! Even though they were gone I could stiil smell shark. I looked behind, Oh No there were more, ahh is this the end of my adventure??????????????
By Laura Walker aka Charlie Small
Chapter 1 Another Danger
As I quickly opened my eyes from a raucous noise as loud as a gunshot I wondered where was I?
I was in a weird looking mushroom house with a hole in the roof. It had big red spots like an apple. The smell was as stinky as smelly cheese that had been sitting in a rubbish bin for ages. I pushed down the door to see a colossal, red eyed dinosaur whose roaring was as piercing as a tree falling down. I couldn’t believe my eyes, AHH!
Then I looked around to see other strange creatures and I saw a pretty fairy on a horse. Suddenly the dinosaur saw me and started charging at me, AHH HELP...........
By Neve Buchan aka Charlie Small
I was in a weird looking mushroom house with a hole in the roof. It had big red spots like an apple. The smell was as stinky as smelly cheese that had been sitting in a rubbish bin for ages. I pushed down the door to see a colossal, red eyed dinosaur whose roaring was as piercing as a tree falling down. I couldn’t believe my eyes, AHH!
Then I looked around to see other strange creatures and I saw a pretty fairy on a horse. Suddenly the dinosaur saw me and started charging at me, AHH HELP...........
By Neve Buchan aka Charlie Small
Friday, June 10, 2011
Room 20's Poetry Competition
Watch our fantastic children reciting their poetry!!! Who is going to win???
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