The Water fall of death!

“Wooooooooooooooow where are we going?” “Wait and see sonny!” said the old man as he turned the boat around.
That’s unusual a........a.......a..... big lamb. What I tort that was funny we never see one of those . we only see one of those at Jake
man Island. Are you ak charley yes I said and how do you know my name. its along story it all sated when zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz owno he properly new the way back home! . what said the old man zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.he was like a woooooooooow wake up wake up I said as I rolled him this is the end I tort!! We were heading strait for a waterfall. owno I said just then a tug slipped out of know wear and arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr mayday were going down said the old man .arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr than this risky rock slipped out this will do I tort to myself but what about the old man I can’t hold on hold on to him to what am I going to do! take him or save myself! Help me!!!!!!!!!!! Arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr it was a dinosaur just then a bucket fill of sleeping power came fizzing down !charley charley wake up come on charley where are we now........ I said mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm washed up on a beach said the old man and if you are wondering what my name is well my name is max max small. WHAT my dad I tort how did he get here !!!!!!!!Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm skusme but how did you how did you get here!!!!!!!! Well when you were small I went to mow the lawn I found a peace off and went to get it in the trees and I fell on a waterfall and ended up here in that cave over there . in that cave I tort well that was strange I never saw that there in the first place.
By Laura Makin aka Charlie Small