You won't belive it! I was walking down a rocky steep road that lead to a deep dark tunnel that looked like the ash of the Puppet Master. When I entered the tunnel I tripped over a rock ‘YOUCH’ I cried as my voice echoed through the tunnel and came to a pulse . As I hauled myself up I saw two gleaming lights, like blood red eyes staring back at me in the thick shadow. I saw the most peculiar creepy creature that I’ve seen in my journal. Dripping with blood and with dead bodies around it on the ground, covered with flies. It only had hind legs , purple glimmering scales like plums , a big lion tail , a sixteen foot tall spiky neck and one big head, so I thought ...
I stepped back as the clumsy monster stood up to strike. I reached for my rucksack and took my chisel and chopped its head off as it struck, seven more heads grew back !!! How am I going to get of this one now?
By Tauryn Payne a.k.a. Charlie Small
Friday, November 4, 2011
Land Of The Roboticons
Pop! Out of the worm hole I came. Crash! Crawling through the broken remains of a ranch slider that was as shiny as some trickling, troublesome, turquoise slime.
Whew I said almost to myself...but who was I talking to?
Click! I turned around as slow as a snail. Right there before my eyes was a darlic looking robot.
“Friend or foe?” It said.
“f...f...f...friend!” (which was pretty obvious because no one wants to get vaporized like a wet piece of paper being shredded in half!)
“Good what is your n...n...n...name?” It started to say but broke down; my chance of getting home was swept away in the hot tropical breeze of this...this robotic island!
I was on an island populated by robots! Ahhhhhh! I said running around franticly what do I do?
I saw a flash of red, green, red, green I looked up, down, up, down - it’s a gravity Bot one of Jakeman’s latest inventions. Upgraded edition! They shoot lasers out of their eyes like burning flames. How do I get of this island!?...
By Ryan Oliver aka Charlie Small
Whew I said almost to myself...but who was I talking to?
Click! I turned around as slow as a snail. Right there before my eyes was a darlic looking robot.
“Friend or foe?” It said.
“f...f...f...friend!” (which was pretty obvious because no one wants to get vaporized like a wet piece of paper being shredded in half!)
“Good what is your n...n...n...name?” It started to say but broke down; my chance of getting home was swept away in the hot tropical breeze of this...this robotic island!
I was on an island populated by robots! Ahhhhhh! I said running around franticly what do I do?
I saw a flash of red, green, red, green I looked up, down, up, down - it’s a gravity Bot one of Jakeman’s latest inventions. Upgraded edition! They shoot lasers out of their eyes like burning flames. How do I get of this island!?...
By Ryan Oliver aka Charlie Small
The Mistake.
I’ve been awoken by a yum smell; it smelt as nice as pie. I hear things clanging and crashing! I look out the window to see a restaurant.
I walked a little closer and saw that it was called the Big Tree. I walked inside and looked through my rucksack for some money. YES 40 bucks. I walked to the cashier and brought food. Just then I saw a sigh saying Train station. Ok I’ll use my ticket from my rucksack.
When I wasn’t looking a piece of paper fell off the sign, it said the Betty MAE.
When I went out I said wow this doesn’t look like the train station. I was so busy looking around I didn’t notice I was stepping aboard Captain Cut Throats ship. Then I heard her voice, “Good to have you back!” She said. “Now get to work!!!”
By Aidan Garrity a.k.a Charlie Small
I walked a little closer and saw that it was called the Big Tree. I walked inside and looked through my rucksack for some money. YES 40 bucks. I walked to the cashier and brought food. Just then I saw a sigh saying Train station. Ok I’ll use my ticket from my rucksack.
When I wasn’t looking a piece of paper fell off the sign, it said the Betty MAE.
When I went out I said wow this doesn’t look like the train station. I was so busy looking around I didn’t notice I was stepping aboard Captain Cut Throats ship. Then I heard her voice, “Good to have you back!” She said. “Now get to work!!!”
By Aidan Garrity a.k.a Charlie Small
The Big Bang...
”Kid, kid, kid.” I woke up to hear Captain Cut-Throat yelling in my ear! “Wake up kid!”
Oh no I’m still on the Betty Mae, I thought I’d left this thing years ago (see my journal the Pirate Galleon). “You’ve been asleep for too long your going in the water.” Captain Cut-throat said. “No, No! NOOOOOOO” I shouted “Ha ha heave” the crew said in strength, SPLASH!!!
I smell shark, Oh no there’s a big great white shark feasting on a school of pilys. Luckily I have a pop up boat one of Jakemans inventions and a net to catch some food. Oh when I was on the ship I was BULLIED! Yep me Charlie Small being bullied by a girl, and I almost died four times. The ship doesn’t look much different to any other pirate ship in the world. (Apart from her husband’s one)
“Captain Cut-Throat why did you do that you really mean bully?”
“Because you were being a nuisance!” Captain Cut-Throat bellowed” Grrrr!” I replied. Splish splash is the sound of my hands thrusting though the water.
“Suckers!” I shouted as I clambered onto dry land, Bang, Bang, CABOOM!!! “Aaaaarrrrrhhhhh” I screamed, because they were firing cannon balls at me. I sprinted for two days until I found a jungle. Climbing the tallest tree trying to rest I was taken...
By Dion aka charlie small.
Oh no I’m still on the Betty Mae, I thought I’d left this thing years ago (see my journal the Pirate Galleon). “You’ve been asleep for too long your going in the water.” Captain Cut-throat said. “No, No! NOOOOOOO” I shouted “Ha ha heave” the crew said in strength, SPLASH!!!
I smell shark, Oh no there’s a big great white shark feasting on a school of pilys. Luckily I have a pop up boat one of Jakemans inventions and a net to catch some food. Oh when I was on the ship I was BULLIED! Yep me Charlie Small being bullied by a girl, and I almost died four times. The ship doesn’t look much different to any other pirate ship in the world. (Apart from her husband’s one)
“Captain Cut-Throat why did you do that you really mean bully?”
“Because you were being a nuisance!” Captain Cut-Throat bellowed” Grrrr!” I replied. Splish splash is the sound of my hands thrusting though the water.
“Suckers!” I shouted as I clambered onto dry land, Bang, Bang, CABOOM!!! “Aaaaarrrrrhhhhh” I screamed, because they were firing cannon balls at me. I sprinted for two days until I found a jungle. Climbing the tallest tree trying to rest I was taken...
By Dion aka charlie small.
The Water fall of death!
“Wooooooooooooooow where are we going?” “Wait and see sonny!” said the old man as he turned the boat around.
That’s unusual a........a.......a..... big lamb. What I tort that was funny we never see one of those . we only see one of those at Jake
man Island. Are you ak charley yes I said and how do you know my name. its along story it all sated when zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz owno he properly new the way back home! . what said the old man zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.he was like a woooooooooow wake up wake up I said as I rolled him this is the end I tort!! We were heading strait for a waterfall. owno I said just then a tug slipped out of know wear and arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr mayday were going down said the old man .arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr than this risky rock slipped out this will do I tort to myself but what about the old man I can’t hold on hold on to him to what am I going to do! take him or save myself! Help me!!!!!!!!!!! Arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr it was a dinosaur just then a bucket fill of sleeping power came fizzing down !charley charley wake up come on charley where are we now........ I said mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm washed up on a beach said the old man and if you are wondering what my name is well my name is max max small. WHAT my dad I tort how did he get here !!!!!!!!Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm skusme but how did you how did you get here!!!!!!!! Well when you were small I went to mow the lawn I found a peace off and went to get it in the trees and I fell on a waterfall and ended up here in that cave over there . in that cave I tort well that was strange I never saw that there in the first place.
By Laura Makin aka Charlie Small
That’s unusual a........a.......a..... big lamb. What I tort that was funny we never see one of those . we only see one of those at Jake
man Island. Are you ak charley yes I said and how do you know my name. its along story it all sated when zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz owno he properly new the way back home! . what said the old man zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.he was like a woooooooooow wake up wake up I said as I rolled him this is the end I tort!! We were heading strait for a waterfall. owno I said just then a tug slipped out of know wear and arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr mayday were going down said the old man .arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr than this risky rock slipped out this will do I tort to myself but what about the old man I can’t hold on hold on to him to what am I going to do! take him or save myself! Help me!!!!!!!!!!! Arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr it was a dinosaur just then a bucket fill of sleeping power came fizzing down !charley charley wake up come on charley where are we now........ I said mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm washed up on a beach said the old man and if you are wondering what my name is well my name is max max small. WHAT my dad I tort how did he get here !!!!!!!!Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm skusme but how did you how did you get here!!!!!!!! Well when you were small I went to mow the lawn I found a peace off and went to get it in the trees and I fell on a waterfall and ended up here in that cave over there . in that cave I tort well that was strange I never saw that there in the first place.
By Laura Makin aka Charlie Small
Friday, September 23, 2011
Terrible Terrors
You won’t believe what I found! It’s a black slimy 8ft tall monster with yellow teeth and claws the size of a couch and flowing out of its mouth is swamp green, gooey gunk. Its eyes were as red as blood in fire and they looked so fierce it would send ten pro wrestlers running for the Military. But worse was its tail, it looked like a triceratops tail with a hole in it which bursts out gas and makes you hallucinate your worst nightmares. I’ll tell you more soon bye.....
Where am I? It looks like a tent made of branches and large leaves. As I walked outside I was on the most beautiful island I’d ever seen, it had vines wrapped around trees with puffins on branches.
The wind was calm and the water sparkled with the sounds of seagulls in the distance.
“I should stay here, take a break” I said.... GOOD GOLLY WHAT IS THIS! IT LOOKS LIKE A 10 FT YELLOW SILVERBACK! Its teeth looks like 2 crocodiles which are 12 meters long, its eyes are as small as grapes. I’ll get to you soon after I deal with this evil monkey bye!
By Jaden Johnson aka Charlie Small.
Where am I? It looks like a tent made of branches and large leaves. As I walked outside I was on the most beautiful island I’d ever seen, it had vines wrapped around trees with puffins on branches.
The wind was calm and the water sparkled with the sounds of seagulls in the distance.
“I should stay here, take a break” I said.... GOOD GOLLY WHAT IS THIS! IT LOOKS LIKE A 10 FT YELLOW SILVERBACK! Its teeth looks like 2 crocodiles which are 12 meters long, its eyes are as small as grapes. I’ll get to you soon after I deal with this evil monkey bye!
By Jaden Johnson aka Charlie Small.
Monday, September 19, 2011
The Tree Tower
I woke. In front of me was an arch of oak trees which curved around in a circle above me - the start off a bridge has formed. Starring down at me is the gruesome Captain Cut Throat. “Good morning Charlie!” she hissed.
I got up. In front of me was a mighty digger that looked as if it was going to sink in the gooey mud. To my horror, tied to a mound of rock were my mum and Jakeman!
“Let them go!” I cried. “I’ll, I’ll do anything!” All of a sudden the digger moved forward. I realized who was driving it! “NO!” I whaled. Craik yes it was Craik.
“Hello boy!” He said grinning. Suddenly shrill laughter burst out of Captain Cut Throat’s mouth and to my surprise she melted. There in replace of Captain Cut Throat was a weird creature, its skin was a brownish greyish colour, and its eyes were thin and shadowy as a black pencil. The creature was as big as a six year old child whose giggles sounded hollow like an air vent. A shiver ran down my spine as I noticed its insane grin. Oh help.....!
By Emily Hewitt a.k.a Charlie Small
I got up. In front of me was a mighty digger that looked as if it was going to sink in the gooey mud. To my horror, tied to a mound of rock were my mum and Jakeman!
“Let them go!” I cried. “I’ll, I’ll do anything!” All of a sudden the digger moved forward. I realized who was driving it! “NO!” I whaled. Craik yes it was Craik.
“Hello boy!” He said grinning. Suddenly shrill laughter burst out of Captain Cut Throat’s mouth and to my surprise she melted. There in replace of Captain Cut Throat was a weird creature, its skin was a brownish greyish colour, and its eyes were thin and shadowy as a black pencil. The creature was as big as a six year old child whose giggles sounded hollow like an air vent. A shiver ran down my spine as I noticed its insane grin. Oh help.....!
By Emily Hewitt a.k.a Charlie Small
Captain Cut Throat
I woke up! But still had my eyes closed! I felt a cold breeze on my skin. I opened my eyes and saw I was on a snowy mountain, I suddenly saw smoke coming out of it.
“Yay, yay, I’m saved!” I ran and ran up the mountain and I saw people were having a camp fire, that’s where the smoke was coming from.
I asked where I was but they said not on word. So I went away. Suddenly I slipped, I was falling down the snowy mountain, what should I do??
I fell into a boat that looked exactly like the Betty Mae, I heard a voice it sounded like Captain Cut-Throat. I opened my eyes and Captain Cut-Throat was standing right in front of me.
I thought how did Captain Cut-throat get here on the Betty Mae? Something is going to happen to me I’m going to walk the plank no!!!!! Captain Cut-throat pushed me in the water. I took a deep breath and closed my eyes. When I was in the water I opened my eyes - right in front of me was a great white shark Ahh!!!!!!!!! The shark was as big as a tree, is this my last adventure?
By Natasha Dobbs a.k.a Charlie Small
“Yay, yay, I’m saved!” I ran and ran up the mountain and I saw people were having a camp fire, that’s where the smoke was coming from.
I asked where I was but they said not on word. So I went away. Suddenly I slipped, I was falling down the snowy mountain, what should I do??
I fell into a boat that looked exactly like the Betty Mae, I heard a voice it sounded like Captain Cut-Throat. I opened my eyes and Captain Cut-Throat was standing right in front of me.
I thought how did Captain Cut-throat get here on the Betty Mae? Something is going to happen to me I’m going to walk the plank no!!!!! Captain Cut-throat pushed me in the water. I took a deep breath and closed my eyes. When I was in the water I opened my eyes - right in front of me was a great white shark Ahh!!!!!!!!! The shark was as big as a tree, is this my last adventure?
By Natasha Dobbs a.k.a Charlie Small
THE BETTY MAE
As Captain Cut Throat threw me from the Betty Mae I landed head first right into a princess’ tent !!!
Strange noises were coming from outside, I peeked through the flap and could not believe my eyes. An enormous, slimy dinosaur was in front of me.
I ran for my life. After that I looked back there I was at the princess’ castle. I almost forgot my name is Charlie Small and I am at least 400 years old and I look like I am a 8, I am trapped in the middle of nowhere!
I am going to call my mum so here it goes beep, beep, beep, “hello you have got through to voice mail for Sandra please leave a message after the break or hang up and press *.” Dam it, I will try again tonight.
And then I turned around and there was a big Terex Dinosaur coming towards me, so I ran for my life. I was out of breath so I put my head between my knees and that felt better.
By Grace aka Charlie Small
Strange noises were coming from outside, I peeked through the flap and could not believe my eyes. An enormous, slimy dinosaur was in front of me.
I ran for my life. After that I looked back there I was at the princess’ castle. I almost forgot my name is Charlie Small and I am at least 400 years old and I look like I am a 8, I am trapped in the middle of nowhere!
I am going to call my mum so here it goes beep, beep, beep, “hello you have got through to voice mail for Sandra please leave a message after the break or hang up and press *.” Dam it, I will try again tonight.
And then I turned around and there was a big Terex Dinosaur coming towards me, so I ran for my life. I was out of breath so I put my head between my knees and that felt better.
By Grace aka Charlie Small
A DANGER !!!!
You won’t believe it! I was walking down a rocky steep road that lead to a deep dark tunnel that looked like the ash of the Puppet Master. When I entered the tunnel I tripped over a rock ‘YOUCH’ I cried as my voice echoed through the tunnel and came to a pulse . As I hauled myself up I saw two gleaming lights, like blood red eyes staring back at me in the thick shadow. I saw the most peculiar creepy creature that I’ve seen in my journal. Dripping with blood and with dead bodies around it on the ground, covered with flies. It only had hind legs , purple glimmering scales like plums , a big lion tail , a sixteen foot tall spiky neck and one big head, so I thought ...
I stepped back as the clumsy monster stood up to strike. I reached for my rucksack and took my chisel and chopped its head off as it struck, seven more heads grew back !!! How am I going to get of this one now?
I stepped back as the clumsy monster stood up to strike. I reached for my rucksack and took my chisel and chopped its head off as it struck, seven more heads grew back !!! How am I going to get of this one now?
The Mistake
I’ve been awoken by a yum smell; it smelt as nice as pie. I hear things clanging and crashing! I look out the window to see a restaurant.
I walked a little closer and saw that it was called the Big Tree. I walked inside and looked through my rucksack for some money. YES 40 bucks. I walked to the cashier and brought food. Just then I saw a sigh saying Train station. Ok I’ll use my ticket from my rucksack.
When I wasn’t looking a piece of paper fell off the sign, it said the Betty MAE.
When I went out I said wow this doesn’t look like the train station. I was so busy looking around I didn’t notice I was stepping aboard Captain Cut Throats ship. Then I heard her voice, “Good to have you back!” She said. “Now get to work!!!”
By Aidan Garrity a.k.a Charlie Small
I walked a little closer and saw that it was called the Big Tree. I walked inside and looked through my rucksack for some money. YES 40 bucks. I walked to the cashier and brought food. Just then I saw a sigh saying Train station. Ok I’ll use my ticket from my rucksack.
When I wasn’t looking a piece of paper fell off the sign, it said the Betty MAE.
When I went out I said wow this doesn’t look like the train station. I was so busy looking around I didn’t notice I was stepping aboard Captain Cut Throats ship. Then I heard her voice, “Good to have you back!” She said. “Now get to work!!!”
By Aidan Garrity a.k.a Charlie Small
THE BIG CHASE
Ahh! I just woke up from my concussion! I forgot how I got it, I was in the water and I was getting chased by a colossal fish! I was swimming and swimming then it was about time I got to shore.
Then there was a giant, it was as big as the Sky tower! I found a huge piece of chicken. I threw it into the water and the giant jumped into the water to get the chicken.
Next I run into the Jungle and Thrack, a big silverback gorilla from my first journal Gorilla City, started chasing me! I was running and running for my life! And suddenly I remembered I could speak gorilla, I turned around and saw it was actually Grapple from Gorilla city.
By Cory g A.K.A Charlie Small
Then there was a giant, it was as big as the Sky tower! I found a huge piece of chicken. I threw it into the water and the giant jumped into the water to get the chicken.
Next I run into the Jungle and Thrack, a big silverback gorilla from my first journal Gorilla City, started chasing me! I was running and running for my life! And suddenly I remembered I could speak gorilla, I turned around and saw it was actually Grapple from Gorilla city.
By Cory g A.K.A Charlie Small
The Nice Place
Oh my gosh I just got woken by a bunch of birds, well I’ve been asleep for ages, but where am I? I’m in some nice gazebo, with a bunch of eagles around me, and lots of nice trees with flowers they are roses! The colours are...red, pink and white they smelt really nice!
Maybe I’ll phone my mum? So I phoned my mum, Hello I said “Oh Charlie are you having a great time, you’ve got to hurry up your dinner is getting cold. Oh here comes your dad.”
“Mum, mum,” Oh no she’s hung up again, well at least I get to hear from her, but her voice sounds like a bodyguard! So what am I supposed to do now? Maybe I should look around, this is odd it’s such a nice place, and how the heck did I get here?
“Hello Charlie I’ve been waiting for you!”
“Who are you?” I asked.
“I’m Jake man!” said the man.
“WOW, your Jakeman, I’ve wanted to ask you so many questions!”
“Yes, Yes boy ok boy you’ve got to calm down! Now I’m here to take you home.”
“HOME ,YAY, so where can I start with my questions?” “Come on boy you’re like a chit chatting lad.” he laughed.
“Well you’re as awesome as Wild Bob Ffance.” I laughed back.
“Come on kid we’ve got to go”........
By Faye
Maybe I’ll phone my mum? So I phoned my mum, Hello I said “Oh Charlie are you having a great time, you’ve got to hurry up your dinner is getting cold. Oh here comes your dad.”
“Mum, mum,” Oh no she’s hung up again, well at least I get to hear from her, but her voice sounds like a bodyguard! So what am I supposed to do now? Maybe I should look around, this is odd it’s such a nice place, and how the heck did I get here?
“Hello Charlie I’ve been waiting for you!”
“Who are you?” I asked.
“I’m Jake man!” said the man.
“WOW, your Jakeman, I’ve wanted to ask you so many questions!”
“Yes, Yes boy ok boy you’ve got to calm down! Now I’m here to take you home.”
“HOME ,YAY, so where can I start with my questions?” “Come on boy you’re like a chit chatting lad.” he laughed.
“Well you’re as awesome as Wild Bob Ffance.” I laughed back.
“Come on kid we’ve got to go”........
By Faye
Tuesday, August 30, 2011
Chapter 2 SHARK ATTACK...
My eyes were closed very tight, I felt water dripping on my skin.
I slowly opened my eyes. I was under the water! I had no idea how I was breathing? I Looked down- I had gills, ahh.
Then I slowly swam around ahh ehh ohh shark s.
There were one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine. There were nine sharks right in front of me!
I quickly swam away. But it is was late ...
They had spotted me all ready. As fast as a blink of a eye they were after me. I quickly hid behind a rock, they swam away, phew! Even though they were gone I could stiil smell shark. I looked behind, Oh No there were more, ahh is this the end of my adventure??????????????
By Laura Walker aka Charlie Small
I slowly opened my eyes. I was under the water! I had no idea how I was breathing? I Looked down- I had gills, ahh.
Then I slowly swam around ahh ehh ohh shark s.
There were one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine. There were nine sharks right in front of me!
I quickly swam away. But it is was late ...
They had spotted me all ready. As fast as a blink of a eye they were after me. I quickly hid behind a rock, they swam away, phew! Even though they were gone I could stiil smell shark. I looked behind, Oh No there were more, ahh is this the end of my adventure??????????????
By Laura Walker aka Charlie Small
Chapter 1 Another Danger
As I quickly opened my eyes from a raucous noise as loud as a gunshot I wondered where was I?
I was in a weird looking mushroom house with a hole in the roof. It had big red spots like an apple. The smell was as stinky as smelly cheese that had been sitting in a rubbish bin for ages. I pushed down the door to see a colossal, red eyed dinosaur whose roaring was as piercing as a tree falling down. I couldn’t believe my eyes, AHH!
Then I looked around to see other strange creatures and I saw a pretty fairy on a horse. Suddenly the dinosaur saw me and started charging at me, AHH HELP...........
By Neve Buchan aka Charlie Small
I was in a weird looking mushroom house with a hole in the roof. It had big red spots like an apple. The smell was as stinky as smelly cheese that had been sitting in a rubbish bin for ages. I pushed down the door to see a colossal, red eyed dinosaur whose roaring was as piercing as a tree falling down. I couldn’t believe my eyes, AHH!
Then I looked around to see other strange creatures and I saw a pretty fairy on a horse. Suddenly the dinosaur saw me and started charging at me, AHH HELP...........
By Neve Buchan aka Charlie Small
Friday, June 10, 2011
Room 20's Poetry Competition
Watch our fantastic children reciting their poetry!!! Who is going to win???
Thursday, May 26, 2011
Saturday, May 21, 2011
Reading Rewards
You should be reading for at least 20 minutes every night as part of your homework. To encourage you to keep this up and to read more I have a new reward incentive.
Every time you show me your communication book with a date and signature to say you have read, you will get a tick on the chart. Every tick will be worth 50c (play money). Once you have earned $10 (20 signatures) you can start to spend your money in the classroom.
You will be able to buy: time on the computer, a chance to sit with your best friend, be able to teach a lesson, choose some free time activities.....and other rewards to be agreed with all of you.
So get reading and remember to show me your communication book each day. Miss Edwards
Every time you show me your communication book with a date and signature to say you have read, you will get a tick on the chart. Every tick will be worth 50c (play money). Once you have earned $10 (20 signatures) you can start to spend your money in the classroom.
You will be able to buy: time on the computer, a chance to sit with your best friend, be able to teach a lesson, choose some free time activities.....and other rewards to be agreed with all of you.
So get reading and remember to show me your communication book each day. Miss Edwards
Friday, May 6, 2011
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